I'd read the review if I could get past the first line. You seem to be really good at gathering info while playing games but my god, writing just isn't your strong suit.

I already apologized to Frozen about this since I sent it for review on the frontpage, but I've been going through a rough bunch, but I still wanted to contribute however I could. Since I've done better than this, and I know I can do better, I decided to post this on the forums and FrozenIpaq's doing his own re-write, and I'm just going to go back to the drawing board and really focus so hopefully I can release a Retro Review on Chrono Cross before the end of the week.

Thanks for the constructive criticism though.

Challenge: read the write-up and give us your impression of it ;) I'm trying to help Kez out by giving a break-down of do's and dont's (you may disagree with my qualifications) in his writing. We appreciate any member who takes the initiative to give us a detailed write-up of their impressions.

Mostly grammatical fixes, there's a lot you could do with the vocabulary used, and structure of the review.

Much appreciated ilyace!

Fusing Ipaq and Kerza's writing styles will surely produce some surrealist works of art, I look forward to them.

"As I took the controller to reiterate the game, I glanced upon it's deficiencies before long as, I reiterated the game."

Where have you been! A bot was just talking about you...

I would also like to reiterate that some help is better than no help

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